Should be "by-passers" (incl. the hyphen) and "dismantling signage":
https://i.imgur.com/l4a8vxn.jpg

Although technically correct(?) in its current wording - "when he and his partner ... answered a call..." still has a better ring to it:
https://i.imgur.com/rUO0Xti.jpg

Should be "what would I look for?":
https://i.imgur.com/NCOBYwV.jpg

A bit of inconsistency again with "Insuliandian" vs. "Insulindian".
This being the only instance of "Insuliandian" so far, the more frequently used "Insulindian" should be the correct one:
https://i.imgur.com/Jkzy29X.jpg

Should be "stayed hidden all these years.":
https://i.imgur.com/by3GekO.jpg

Missing punctuation (period) after "useful":
https://i.imgur.com/C42PTwG.jpg

Should be either
1) "what do you mean, 'odd light'?" (using a comma, and single quotation marks)
2) "what do you mean with 'odd light'?" (incl. "with" and single quotation marks)
or, since it's previously referred to as "strange light"
3) "what do you mean, 'strange light'?" (using a comma, and single quotation marks)
4) "what do you mean with 'strange light'?" (incl. "with" and single quotation marks):
https://i.imgur.com/dVekGnI.jpg

Should be "about a undiscovered sub-species of man?" (not "about and undiscovered..."):
https://i.imgur.com/NbQlPk4.jpg

Noticed that no shirt is appearing on Harry, dispite me equiping a shirt..

In some dialogues the choice menu it's not displayed correctly, for example, while talking about bussiness with the novelty dice maker, not all options are displayed, only 8 and I cannot find a way to end the dialogue, I thinks there's a 10 dialogue option but can't see it, if I pres 9, it starts another dialogue option even if I can't see past 8.

I tried scrolling down and draguing but nothing past 8.

When talking to Joyce Messier at night (with Kim Kitsuragi away on "delivery"):

You can talk to her about "Which side was Wild Pines Group on?" and "What would you have done differently?"

If you choose "I would have killed more" and "Until the middle class", you will get a reply from Kim Kitsuragi.
Even though this should be impossible.

Since "nor" requires a second negative (statement) of some sort (usually "neither") it looks to me like it's actually supposed to be "The wind in the yard doesn't reach the hawthorn, nor does light come in from this window."
The prior "Motionless." descriptor also suggesting exactly that - the wind not reaching the hawthorn:
https://i.imgur.com/LF1zhbt.jpg

Should be "standard working boots" (not singular "boot"):
https://i.imgur.com/hi1RbIm.jpg

Again - should be "standard working boots" (not singular "boot"):
https://i.imgur.com/zZxLIMv.jpg

Should be "ex-Oranjese special forces." (incl. the hyphen):
https://i.imgur.com/ZcMxCBv.jpg

May be technically correct (or is it?) but "I'm getting got a bizarre message..." reads (and sounds) weird somehow:
https://i.imgur.com/eT8radu.jpg

Should be "your twitching eye.":
https://i.imgur.com/ZS4cYHh.jpg

Should be "taps on the guttering light bulb" (dropping the "the" between "taps" and "on"):
https://i.imgur.com/F2XXrzu.jpg

Should be "into your palm," (dropping the second "your"):
https://i.imgur.com/63S4hXP.jpg

Should be "Pyrholidon is the perfect match":
https://i.imgur.com/wcCecnL.jpg

Should be "To get to the coast":
https://i.imgur.com/jl90ozN.jpg

A little too much spacing between "is" and "something" here:
https://i.imgur.com/p8Dmgg8.jpg

Somehow "(Proceed politely.)" becomes "(Proceed.,)" when going for dialogue option 1. ("Nice view...") first:
https://i.imgur.com/jJyVXrJ.jpg

Something different (but equally nitpicky) for a change - depending on the equipped clothes and the special animation being played out (like trying and failing to kick the door in) there's mesh/texture clipping happening.
In this case it's the "Man from Hjelmdall" t-shirt poking through the Pinball Maker's Coat (the clipping/poking through being even more prominent with the White Satin Shirt).
https://i.imgur.com/eI6ifex.jpg

If you make the text smaller in the options menu it will fix the problem.

Should be "Vredefort" (as established just two lines earlier):
https://i.imgur.com/nmiF2O5.jpg

Should be "of the Kineema's headlights":
https://i.imgur.com/Bl8DgYS.jpg

Should be "She really isn't his taste.":
https://i.imgur.com/iEl1b6Y.jpg

Should be "Like what has really happened...":
https://i.imgur.com/rRLPj4T.jpg

Should be "both know where this is going.":
https://i.imgur.com/rbXnh6g.jpg

Should be "Sad news for the district" or "Sad news from the district" resp. "Sad news out of the district" or something along those lines:
https://i.imgur.com/ChB3AgN.jpg