Posted July 26, 2012
UK_John: I disagree with the pizza, I think that was put in to show April's new confidence. A lot of Chapters 11 and 12 I felt were to remind you how far April had come from that young, shy, indecisive teenager!
Ghorpm: That's not what I'm complaining about. It's clear that April changed a lot during the journey. But how come 'Jerry' was deceived so easily? That was far-fetched for my taste. I also didn't like the thing with the shadow and monkey but there it was at least clearly indicated that Freddie Melon is a complete imbecile. I was rather expecting that April would rather manipulate Gerald's vanity to enter the building. That would be perfectly justified.