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Dr. Jensen at Cronus factility: "infastructure", lacking an "r".

Later: "This is the same framework that Dr. Rhamus initiated when you he woke you on the Dauntless." Should probably not have the first "you" in that sentence.

- Dr. Rhamus a while later: "technologys" rather than "technologies"
- "Rodgers interface will display a queue..." rather than "Rodger's interface will display a cue..". (Apostrophe missing + last word probably meaning indication, rather than list. I'd also change the end of that sentence to change a singular referring to multiples, such as e.g. "...display a cue (or icon/indication) by each star map system having one."
- I believe it's spelled "apologies", i.e. a single "p".
- "HUB". I'd rather use lower case and quotes, as it's not an acronym. Upper case also used later.
- "...a active..." -> "...an active..."
- "...providing queues..." -> "...providing cues..."
- Rodger: "...shops electronics..." -> "...ship's electronics...", i.e. missing apostrophe.
- "a Aznari" -> "an Aznari"
- "good number ruins" -> "good number of ruins"
- I'd also say "sector, or area of space,", indicator both expressions indicate the same thing.
- "a 'active'" -> "an 'active'" (single quotes used by me instead of double, as I'm already using double quotes
- Aznari Scanner description: "ships" -> "ship's"
- "a 'Active'" -"an..."
- I'd extend the text further if possible to say data needs to be analyzed to find active ruins.

Edit: The star map icon doesn't work as I thought above. I'd just say an icon is brought up that selects the appropriate star system when selected.
Post edited August 18, 2022 by PatrikLundell