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General discussion[Forum game] Haiku'venture(155 posts)(155 posts)
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This is my favourite topic
Posted June 11, 2021
Out just two minutes,

I'm drenched and need a shower,

It's Summer here in Texas.
Posted June 12, 2021
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Hooyaah: Out just two minutes,

I'm drenched and need a shower,

It's Summer here in Texas.
But your "haiku" has
five, eight and seven units,
so not a haiku

You should not rush it
rather take your time, slowly
and do proper work
Posted June 12, 2021
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Hooyaah: Out just two minutes, (5)

I'm(1) drenched(1) and(1) need(1) a(1) shower(2), (7)

It's(1) Summer(2) here(1) in(1) Texas(2). (7)
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amok: But your "haiku" has
five, eight and seven units,
so not a haiku

You should not rush it
rather take your time, slowly
and do proper work
Out just two minutes

I'm drenched and need a shower

Summer in Texas
Post edited June 12, 2021 by Hooyaah
Posted June 12, 2021
The strenght of haiku:
It needs strict syllable count
but needs no rhyming.

The weekness of it:
It needs strict syllable count
but needs no rhyming.
Posted June 12, 2021
I should be ashamed
of myself because I am
counting with fingers.
Posted June 12, 2021
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MightyFloTheKing: I should be ashamed
of myself because I am
counting with fingers.
hmm
Posted June 13, 2021
I hear voices now,
but there's nobody here with me,
darkness, black shadows
Posted June 13, 2021
The voices are here.
You say that we are alone
But we never are.

Look all around us.
You can't see anything here
Yet you know better.
Posted June 13, 2021
It's sale time again
We buy, therefore we matter
We'll all be devoured.
Posted June 13, 2021
I want to be cool.
I can’t be me ‘coz I suck.
Maybe I’ll learn life.
Posted June 13, 2021
"Damnation!", he says,
"No donation", then implies,
"No salvation" - harsh!
Posted June 13, 2021
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Vendor-Lazarus: Not another forum game please
They are already everywhere we see today
Makes me gouge out eyes
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amok: you need to learn, now
the structure of haiku
this is incorrect
no, it is not
haiku poems don't have to use
a 5-7-5 syllable pattern or even 3 lines
do you also ask seasonal words too?

also, technically, without seasonal words,
what you most write
is a senryu not a haiku

5-7-5 pattern is a popular misconception
don't force anyone who don't use it

read about haiku first
Posted June 13, 2021
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amok: you need to learn, now
the structure of haiku
this is incorrect
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Accatone: no, it is not
haiku poems don't have to use
a 5-7-5 syllable pattern or even 3 lines
do you also ask seasonal words too?

also, technically, without seasonal words,
what you most write
is a senryu not a haiku

5-7-5 pattern is a popular misconception
don't force anyone who don't use it

read about haiku first
I ponder the serious
I cast away the nonsense
I am left bereft

my feather stumbles
black ichor dripping viscous
I pen my response

While a game is played
Rules must be agreed upon
While spirit must nod

five seven five please
even if it's nothing more
than joy we've left penned
Posted June 13, 2021
Never mind. I shall write no more since the OP says "five seven five please".
Post edited June 13, 2021 by Accatone
Posted June 13, 2021
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MaceyNeil: While a game is played
Rules must be agreed upon
While spirit must nod
Beware of chaos,
Those who scorn all rules and laws -
They do not know peace.
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