Posted February 16, 2015
Sepia Tears
For a 1. free 2. ren'py 3. visual novel 4. from Desura, I really couldn't have asked for a lot more. I thought the writing style was pretty adequate, somewhat at the juvenile end of things but not really amateurish. Certainly not written by a Nabokov or Tolstoy, but it wasn't cringe-inducing. The plot wound up a little bit pointless at the end - where it was leading could have had a different payoff and been more rewarding. The music was light jazz/lounge-y and decent, though a few pieces didn't fit the overall feel. The painted photos as background were hit or miss, some bland and suburban, some really pretty. The mood was winter, and achieved fairly well. Only a couple of typos - and they were actual words, so at least a spellcheck was used.
Yet despite all of that, it just wasn't compelling to me at all. After playing an hour or two and putting it aside in late December, I started it over in early January. And it took me until mid-February to get through it. All the pieces seemed to be there, but they didn't fit together for me.
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For a 1. free 2. ren'py 3. visual novel 4. from Desura, I really couldn't have asked for a lot more. I thought the writing style was pretty adequate, somewhat at the juvenile end of things but not really amateurish. Certainly not written by a Nabokov or Tolstoy, but it wasn't cringe-inducing. The plot wound up a little bit pointless at the end - where it was leading could have had a different payoff and been more rewarding. The music was light jazz/lounge-y and decent, though a few pieces didn't fit the overall feel. The painted photos as background were hit or miss, some bland and suburban, some really pretty. The mood was winter, and achieved fairly well. Only a couple of typos - and they were actual words, so at least a spellcheck was used.
Yet despite all of that, it just wasn't compelling to me at all. After playing an hour or two and putting it aside in late December, I started it over in early January. And it took me until mid-February to get through it. All the pieces seemed to be there, but they didn't fit together for me.
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Post edited February 16, 2015 by budejovice