korniatm: PS Why has my critique of the story turned into a counter-critique of my intelligence level or my ability to pay attention to cut-scenes? If I keep giving unpopular opinions is someone going eventually respond that my tie is ugly?
227: Because you didn't complain about pacing. You said you have no idea why you're doing the things you're doing in chapter 2, when it's actually well-explained.
Just because it doesn't fit into your narrow definition of "good pacing" doesn't mean it's somehow lacking. It's just different, which is welcome to many people given how many stories follow the same trite formula.
Let me explain it this way what I meant by have no idea what Im doing:
During Act I in that little pause which you can choose the response I felt that I could look at Garalt and knew what he was thinking before I even looked at the response ( I want to kill this guy, let free him, arrest him etc. etc.)
During Act 2I I have no idea what he is thinking and no idea what response will be. Simple as that