Hey, while I understand you may be looking for feedback on your video, I don't think a video game storefront general discussion is the place for it. There's currently a thread seems more relevant to your current topic present - https://www.gog.com/forum/general/news_multiple_people_dead_after_mass_shooting_at_madden_esports_tournament_in_florida/page7


A single thread asking people for feedback on a topic already discussed in an existing thread seems a little much. As such, I'll be locking this thread.