I have only seen it to like 15 min mark or so? You ramble far too much. Most of your points could have been made in half of that time, and half of those points are just bugbears of little importance (spending several minutes of your video on explaining why you don't like naming conventions are several minutes of my life I'm never getting back - this works in text format as you can skim trough it, not in video.)
Actually, video format has so far been completely pointless and it would work far better as a written text.
I like that you're trying to provide a balanced view in spite of not really liking the game (I guess?) "This particular bit has been done before" argument is pointless and should have just been left out unless you've got a major point to make ;-)
I feel like you're used to work with written text and are now trying to transfer your skills into a video format, sadly, that's not quite as easy. Sadly I'm not massively experienced to give much of an advice in the field, you can look at other youtubers like
Super BunnyHop for inspiration, but I can't quite point out why their videos work well and yours doesn't quite.