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I would agree in some ways. I love that publishers are the gatekeepers because it keeps me from wasting a lot of time on crap.

But at the same time, there's tons of great stuff to read that just can't make its way past the gatekeeper. Either it's not marketable or it's not trendy.
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Magnitus: ...
The biggest good thing publishers do is force editors on authors, even good ones usually need loads more editing than they believe. Just read some of Philip K Dick's stuff (if you can get past the crazy) and you can tell as he gains more leeway in pushing away editors his writing actually gets worse (meanders more and keeps unimportant cruft around).

Now is a tough time for authors, they don't even know what they need often and it's a hard sell to ask them to pay for an editor out of pocket. Yes, printing is cheap, distribution is cheap, but the up front static costs are the same as ever, only the ongoing costs have shrunk to almost nothing.

Also, frankly, The Author's Guild and the like have been kind of douchebags over new technology. Calling the Kindle's robotic text to speech a public performance was bullshit and that's not their only issue they've had recently.

If you don't need to make money from your creative work now is a phenomenal time to be an author. If you need an investment back or an income you are in for a long row to hoe.
Massive congrats on completing your novel and getting it out there. I will check it out as soon as I'm done with the Revelation Space-series. I'm hoping to get a CD out there sometime next year and seing someone I've "seen around" getting work out there is always an inspiration. Thanks for that! :)

Keep up the good (judgement pending) work, buddy! ;)
Congrats mate!

I'm in the same train as you -- Currently writing two pieces I hope to at least publish on kindle. One of them I plan to actually give away for free on a serialized manner (One chapter a week), with the other one being sold only. Good to know I'm not the only writer in these forums :)

PS: If I get around reading your book (got a huge backlog, though the first few pages I read from your novel on amazon looked fine) I'll likely review it on my website, which, though small, might help you get some more readers :)
Hey I'm really looking forward to having a look on my Ipad Kindle reader.
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Tallima: I would agree in some ways. I love that publishers are the gatekeepers because it keeps me from wasting a lot of time on crap.
I suppose, but it also means that they will turn down books that have a decent profit margin, because the profit margin is too low for their standards.

I doubt most publishers would take much interest in a book that might sell, say, 3000 copies.

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orcishgamer: The biggest good thing publishers do is force editors on authors, even good ones usually need loads more editing than they believe. Just read some of Philip K Dick's stuff (if you can get past the crazy) and you can tell as he gains more leeway in pushing away editors his writing actually gets worse (meanders more and keeps unimportant cruft around).
I suppose that is true, though really, the publishers is essentially just doing the matchmaking between a qualified author and a qualified editor and taking the lion's share of the profit in the process.

Nothing would prevent an author from contacting someone qualified to do the editing and in exchange for their services provide them with a return on each sale.

Of course, that would mean that authors would suddenly need to take into account some of those pesky business details (which are currently handled by the publishers, but at a very heavy cost).

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orcishgamer: Now is a tough time for authors, they don't even know what they need often and it's a hard sell to ask them to pay for an editor out of pocket. Yes, printing is cheap, distribution is cheap, but the up front static costs are the same as ever, only the ongoing costs have shrunk to almost nothing.

Also, frankly, The Author's Guild and the like have been kind of douchebags over new technology. Calling the Kindle's robotic text to speech a public performance was bullshit and that's not their only issue they've had recently.
Well, the difference now is that an author with some business sense can actually be reasonably successful at making money on his work without involving the big dogs.

I'll agree with you that it's probably a nightmare for authors who just want to write and don't want to worry about the business end, but there are still publishers for that.
Post edited December 15, 2011 by Magnitus
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Magnitus: ....
It's not that publishers need to play matchmaker it's that editors don't work on spec, they get paid whether you sell a single book or not. The publishers front money for that and most first time authors would find it extremely hard to afford it I would suspect. Most would simply look at the price and opt out I'd suspect.

Still there's certainly ways to work around even that, it's just one of the more sticky problems with authors going it alone.
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Tallima: Let me know if you like it!
I received a Kindle for Christmas, recalled this thread, came back and checked, and picked it up (nice of you to make it free!)

I downloaded it this morning to read during our road trip. I'm only three quarters done with it, but I am very impressed and quite eager to learn the ending. I'll let you know what you thought when I'm done, if you like!
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Tallima: Let me know if you like it!
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Runehamster: I received a Kindle for Christmas, recalled this thread, came back and checked, and picked it up (nice of you to make it free!)

I downloaded it this morning to read during our road trip. I'm only three quarters done with it, but I am very impressed and quite eager to learn the ending. I'll let you know what you thought when I'm done, if you like!
I always love feedback. It's it's great you found it during the promotion!
Okay, here we go!

The Darkest Wand is a fantasy novel by Benjamin Archambault. This review is based on a reading encompassing three sittings in a single day.

Benjamin Archambault brings us the tale of Aimee, a young thief with an uncommon destiny. I am well aware this sounds very generic for a fantasy story - a young orphan raised by a curious old man, destined to play a role in saving the world - let's be honest, the basic idea isn't terribly original.

This makes it all the more extraordinary that The Darkest Wand is such a compelling entry into the genre. As best I know, this is Archambault's first work of fiction. Nonetheless, he has captured the essential elements of the genre and managed to wrap tired old cliches in a fresh story with characters and ideas more engaging and original than most in the genre.

In this review, you will see no mention of his plotting or pacing. Suffice it to say his plotting is superb and his pacing is very good (a bit too much exposition here or there, but that is a prerequisite of the complex storyline), but speaking at all of the story would rob it of its surprising depth.

Characters

Rather than cardboard caricatures of people's roleplaying characters, Archambault brings us a small but charming cast of people that feel real. Although descriptions of appearance or background can come across a bit stilted, Archambault has the rare gift of humanizing his creations. From the candy shared by an elderly gentleman to a roguish innkeeper, even the most incidental of cast members are accorded a proper introduction and a few moments in the spotlight, and the book is the better for this attention. It is clear that Archambault put a great deal of thought into each character he chose to include, and the attention he lavishes on each individual enhances the plot by confusing the lines between the important and unimportant people met throughout the book. (I have a specific example in mind, but spoilers must be avoided!)

Dialogue

The speech Archambault gives his characters is perhaps the strongest point of his writing. I refer not to dialects (intentionally or not, the single attempt at a dialect given in the novel is quite amusing, the odd spelling alone gave me pause and I admit to trying to pronounce the sentences in my head) but to the interplay between characters. Fantasy writers, particularly in their early books, will frequently engage in ridiculously overblown and dramatic speech, or for the sake of exposition have their cast completely break character to build an artificial question and answer section. Archambault skillfully dodges this trap, and even in the lengthy exposition sections gives his characters unique vocal mannerisms and has them react completely in character to any revelations given, which makes these expositions interesting rather than unbearable. In normal dialogue, the speech between characters is quite natural, falling into that easy back-and-forth that is so difficult for even expert writers to precisely duplicate. I wondered on several occasions how much time was spent perfecting the dialogue to make it flow naturally.

Action

The action scenes are eminently serviceable. Although they are not the high points of the book (I admit, I chiefly read Salvatore for his decadently drawn-out melees) they do nothing to detract from the quality of the story and show occasional flashes of real skill. One notable battle taking place in a village is an excellent example of how to write an action scene - Archambault balances action, plot exposition, and character development, and then continued nonstop to a stunning plot twist that left me absolutely reeling (perhaps the strongest writing in the entire book took place in that forty or fifty pages). The stealth based scenes were imaginative and descriptive, and gave a skillful glimpse into the art of a medieval thief.

Originality

Alas, in the world of fantasy, everything has been done before. If I choose to pick nits, the same is true of Archambault's work. The setting is quite generic, and nonspecific - I believe regions were mentioned at a few points, but a handful of towns and a castle are the only areas that receive any real description, and these are taken straight from any fantasy game or story. I thoroughly enjoyed the story itself, but nothing about the world captured my attention and made me eager for new tales told in this land. I would hope any further works by the author attend to this problem and give his world a more concrete and easily recognizable feel.

However, the magic that Archambault presents - from its mechanics, to its purpose and nature - is quite unique. Although no specific element (such as the heavy emphasis on wands) can be pointed at as an original creation, Archambault was obviously inspired by many popular works (including a pair of real surprises) and fuses them effortlessly into a construct that feels unique. It has been said that when enough ideas have been borrowed, the product is original, and this is true. I am not attempting to cast aspersions on Archambault for the inspirations that drove him - nothing is stolen from another work, and he leaves an unmistakable stamp of his own upon each topic.

Content

I attempt to include this in every review. This story deals with some very dark themes, and has several scenes of graphic violence. This story is not appropriate for children, and I would expect a PG-13 rating if it were ever made into a film. There is no sexual content or strong profanity, but nonetheless this is not a children's book, it is aimed at an adult or YA audience. This book has no explicit religious content, but members of certain faiths will find it strongly allegorical. This book depicts a character stealing in a positive light, but makes the inherent moral conundrums clear. This book does not condone violence, despite containing violence.

Thank You

Well done, Mr. Archambault. I shall look forward to reading your next book!
Thanks for the review Runehamster! You give me inspiration of what to look at while writing my next book and what to make sure I'm still doing right.
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Tallima: Thanks for the review Runehamster! You give me inspiration of what to look at while writing my next book and what to make sure I'm still doing right.
I hope I wasn't too hard on you! I really loved the book; it's been almost a year since I last sat down and read a book in a single day. I really enjoyed it, and you should be proud!
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Tallima: Thanks for the review Runehamster! You give me inspiration of what to look at while writing my next book and what to make sure I'm still doing right.
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Runehamster: I hope I wasn't too hard on you! I really loved the book; it's been almost a year since I last sat down and read a book in a single day. I really enjoyed it, and you should be proud!
No, not at all. Professional, constructive criticism. I was well aware of some of what you said, and not aware at all of other things. It's always good to have more eyes on your work.

Thanks again!