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Inadvertently got 512 words. Awesome.

If you might be offended by this, don't read it. It's an (adapted) opening I had for a story ages ago. I am not morbid or anything :P

Bonus points if you can actually figure out what happened :)
The harsh illumination of the headlights crept slowly up the bonnet of my car, turning its somber red into a vivid, blinding white. I began to squint instinctively to protect my sight before I realised there was little to be gained from doing so. After all.. I'd see nothing but black soon enough.

My hands weighed heavily on the turning wheel that directed my car on its path. Still pulling to the left, the wheels wailed out from rain slick roads in protest but they kept their grip. I was thankful for that, at least. The body of the car groaned in discomfort as it was twisted forcefully in the battle between inertia and command.

The light dropped away from my eyes and retreated from the surface of my car. I looked up, unsure what I would see. Part of me was hoping to see something nonsensical. The lamps being made of burning marshmallows perhaps. The mountain beyond to be nothing more than a giant Santa doll. Anything that would reveal this to be nothing more than a twisted dream.

The other car has swerved to avoid me, turning into the lane which I had just exited, their own vehicle twisting in the mirror image of my own. There was not enough room or time for this to go without contact.

And contact there was. A huge screech rang out into the otherwise still night air as metal and plastic met their brethren. Quick reactions had lent to it being a glancing union but inside the cabin was a ruckus the likes of which I could not have imagined. Just hearing that sound of scratching, cracking, crunching.. would be enough to convince anyone of their imminent departure from this plane.

Our windows lined up and I saw inside the other car. I took in every detail, from the shape of the window, to the cheap plastic of the console - even the form of the headrests. The driver was afraid, that much was clear. With eyes firmly shut, they gripped the steering wheel so tightly the blood was being forced from their knuckles.

They slowly slid from view and as our cars disconnected, the sound ceased almost immediately. There was a calm silence as I let go of my steering wheel and a relieved jolt from my car as the wheels turned themselves back to neutral.

The silence was shattered by a jaw-aching crunch as front of my car hit the barrier that lined the highway. I was thrown forward for a moment but even that was interrupted by the truck striking the rear of my vehicle, spinning the boot around over the barrier and sending me and a ton of metal spiraling uncontrolled into the night sky.

The dull roar of air brakes sounded a farewell to me. As the road panned into view, I caught a glimpse of headlights rotating gently to a stop. I've done my part, I thought to myself as gravity took hold and began to starve me of consciousness. I've done my part..

.. and saved her.
Just for fun. The opening of the last speculative fiction short story I sent to try to be published (rejected) (from June 2011):
Golden leaves floated down the river like tiny canoes from an era long past. I breathed a heavy sigh and looked up the bank to the road. The tire tracks leading down to the water were still fresh and muddy. The phone call had come late last Saturday night and I will never forget the words the police officer said. Both of my parents were in the car when it veered off the road and into the river; their bodies were never found and they were assumed to be dead.

I sat down on a nearby rock and struggled to stop my eyes from tearing up. The weight upon my heart was unbearable. Twilight approached and soon rested upon the hills around. A tree branch landed behind me and I looked up to find what had knocked it down. My vision was arrested by the sight of two glowing red discs in the tree...
Not a whole story really, but just a tease, for what it's worth. Like I said, I just posted this for fun. I'll let Detlik decide whether to consider it an entry...
bump for the night
Only 10 more hours to go :)
6 hours until winner is decided
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Detlik: 6 hours until winner is decided
3 hooooouuuuuurrrrrrrsssssss
Last minute entry:
The Johnsons were about to make a loft extension in their house and since the attic cried for cleaning, Mary, the eldest daughter, spared a few quarters to see to it. The very first thing she stumbled upon, after ascending the ludicrously long flight of stairs, was a jumbo chest, swathed with a sort of silk cloth. Underneath was an itsy-bitsy padlock which she managed to get rid of in no time. The inside revealed a real family gem – the portrayal of Mary’s granddad.

Despite her fairly young age at the time he passed on, she still treasured a wealth of memories, with granddad’s bonhomie and hospitality at the top of their list. Only when she beheld his depicted figure on the faded canvas, did she realize how wonderful it would be to have him back again… All of a sudden a voice came to her ears. An undetermined but undoubtedly a human one. “Mary, come to grandpa!”

In the shaft of light coming from the sole dormer window a pale silhouette was hovering. A silhouette featuring her granddad’s face. “You can make it, Mary, just a few steps, come on!” By this time she had been left with no doubts whatsoever – she had to do nothing but leave at once. Gasping, with her eyes grief-stricken and tension breaking all the record rates, Mary pressed the latch, slid her way through the door and...
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xyem: Bonus points if you can actually figure out what happened :)
The protagonist foresaw the truck hitting the other vehicle, in which a female he cared for was driving, so he got all dramatical and sacrificed himself?
The protagonist played a beta of GTA V?
Either way, You are now legally obliged to post the middle and ending of the story somewhere as well!
Post edited November 07, 2011 by MoP
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MoP: The protagonist foresaw the truck hitting the other vehicle, in which a female he cared for was driving, so he got all dramatical and sacrificed himself?
Very, very close - he doesn't know the other driver. It seems a little senseless in that snippet but it has a much greater meaning in the rest of the story.

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MoP: Either way, You are now legally obliged to post the middle and ending of the story somewhere as well!
It's not that good :P
*drumroll*
And the winner is...
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xyem: snip
Our very own Xyem!!!!

Congrats buddy :) Pm me what you want.
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Detlik: *drumroll*
And the winner is...
Our very own Xyem!!!!
Did I just win my own contest?
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Detlik: *drumroll*
And the winner is...
Our very own Xyem!!!!
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xyem: Did I just win my own contest?
Random.org True Random generator thinks so :D
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Detlik: *drumroll*
And the winner is...
Our very own Xyem!!!!
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xyem: Did I just win my own contest?
Ha! Looks like it. Congrats! And thanks again to Detlik.
(Ah I've been meaning to write something for this but time ran out a little. I think it's enough words.)
(Ah no! too late. Ah well here it is. Enjoy purely for amusement!)


There was once this one time a woman sat on a horse. The horse was brown like the deep woods and the woman had hair all coming out of her head.The horse atrotted quite calmly down this dirt path; the woman and the horse were in amongst all these fields and there was a nice golden sunset all across the sky, pillars of scarlet ascending the heavens, whatever you had imagined already. Well there they were, the woman was an accountant's daughter and after fleeing her apartment building she took a taxi to the train station, a train to Dover and finally walked the 16 miles from the train station to the stables where her horse was waiting for her (it's the same horse as from the beginning of the story). The horse was the daughter of another horse but that is of small relevance.
Here's where it gets interesting see. Having reached a point in the field the woman looked up. She seemed to judge some distance or perhaps the weather, then looked out with grave determination. She put on a pair of sunglasses. Large and thick. Then gripped the reins and dug her heels in to her ride's sides (eh? ride's sides? like that?) and off she set, quick trot, then fast gallop and then phenomenal speed. That horse coursed through the field of barley and in it's wake the soil churned and frothed. That horse leapt into the air, born aloft by some rare physical force of the undiscovered universe. Up it went through the clouds, into the sky and out into the majesty of the wide open cosmos, reaching out for eternity.
I know. I saw the whole thing! Blow me if I know what was happening. I need another drink.
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adambiser: Ha! Looks like it. Congrats! And thanks again to Detlik.
I just had few spare games around and I figured I could try my first giveaway....man this is fun! :D
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Detlik: I just had few spare games around and I figured I could try my first giveaway....man this is fun! :D
Be careful. It can be quite addicting :P