Posted April 04, 2012
Aside from a really, really bad feeling, I have no idea. Really, I'm puzzled. I'm also sort of stupid.
Lovercraft meets Doctor Who, eh? :D Love it. It was great, well the first 3/4 were. The ending was worse, still quite good thou.
Nice work, seriously. Made me think, I like that. Din't have much of a lasting impact thou.
I can't even...
Hehe, that was really clever :D Thank you for that.
That was... All right, that was pretty brilliant. Shame you didn't read the topic, and that I currently need to decide between 2 stories, or I would have voted for you.
Heh, how could I have not expected this? :D Clever.
Anyway, currently, it's a tie! Both Tallima and Detlik have 2 votes. So, which one do I choose?
Tallima's work was technically perfect, while Detlik did have quite a few hiccups here and there, both in storytelling, style, and grammar. But that's to be expected: Tallima writes books. Detlik has written his first few stories.
Detlik's story have hit a weak spot of mine with his exploration of the unknown, and even thou it's not perfect, you can feel his enthusiasm from every word.
Tallima made me think, he made me wonder about his story. And that is something I always value.
I ... I don't know. I really, really don't. Really, it's 50:50. However, I do believe Tallima's work is already appreciated by many, so it's only fair to give my vote to Detlik. I'm sorry, Tallima, and do know that I really liked what you have written.
Anyway, Detlik - contact me on Steam or Skype and we'll talk about those games I now owe you, all right?
Lovercraft meets Doctor Who, eh? :D Love it. It was great, well the first 3/4 were. The ending was worse, still quite good thou.
Nice work, seriously. Made me think, I like that. Din't have much of a lasting impact thou.
I can't even...
Hehe, that was really clever :D Thank you for that.
That was... All right, that was pretty brilliant. Shame you didn't read the topic, and that I currently need to decide between 2 stories, or I would have voted for you.
Heh, how could I have not expected this? :D Clever.
Anyway, currently, it's a tie! Both Tallima and Detlik have 2 votes. So, which one do I choose?
Tallima's work was technically perfect, while Detlik did have quite a few hiccups here and there, both in storytelling, style, and grammar. But that's to be expected: Tallima writes books. Detlik has written his first few stories.
Detlik's story have hit a weak spot of mine with his exploration of the unknown, and even thou it's not perfect, you can feel his enthusiasm from every word.
Tallima made me think, he made me wonder about his story. And that is something I always value.
I ... I don't know. I really, really don't. Really, it's 50:50. However, I do believe Tallima's work is already appreciated by many, so it's only fair to give my vote to Detlik. I'm sorry, Tallima, and do know that I really liked what you have written.
Anyway, Detlik - contact me on Steam or Skype and we'll talk about those games I now owe you, all right?
