JocktheLock1: Staff, delete this dead thread. :)
(Reply to this post if you want it to stay or be deleted.)
(Do not delete thread yet, I am awaiting people's answers.)
Why delete? Locking should be enough.
I for one think this engaging story should remain for all to read.
Or at least remain as an example of how not to write a proper story. LOL.
I am still waiting for someone to come along and edit the story for easy digestion. :)
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And thus the story ended.