Done with these at least. As an added note, that copy I got for free at that event was missing the last chapter and the very end of the one before it. Wanted to donate it to the Metropolitan Library (where I loaned the other one from when I saw that this was 2nd in a series, and which listed this one as on the purchase list), even sent the form, then realized the issue and had to send another message to say woops, nothing to donate after all it seems :/ So went to the store I got it from then, found a copy there (with all pages, but the ones missing from this one printed a few lines down - text was all in there, but page numbers ended up off the page), read the end, then left them the incomplete one, also saying why. Hoping they'll either send it back to publisher or recycle it, but who knows. (Had sent a message on-line before, was told to tell my story to an employee there and maybe I'll have it exchanged, despite no proof of having gotten it from them in the first place and the fact that I didn't actually purchase it, but I said nah, don't want to keep it and it'd seem like a prank if I'd say I want to donate it, then that I can't, then that I can again. So didn't ask now, and the employee didn't offer, just apologized.)
MILA 2.0: Renegade Read this in Romanian, after somewhat accidentally ending up with it at the end of a
World Book Day event. Spotted a few places where something was obviously wrong with the translation, but while I doubt that it was better than that of
the first book in
the series, I can't really know. Translating "Renegade" into "Tradarea" ("Betrayal") as the title really doesn't seem right though. Also, that use of metric units in some places but not in others remains, and I still don't know whether it's like that in the original text as well or
the translator keeps converting only in some places. The first option seems far more likely, but it's still odd either way.
About the book itself, at least it doesn't seem like the novelization of the tutorial of an action game anymore, but it's oddly mundane considering the potential of the concept. Also shallow, perhaps when it comes to the all too few problems resulting from being wanted by multiple forces in particular, but definitely not only for that reason. Many scenes seem thrown in just because they're the fastest way to move on to the next part, consequences are often discarded, the romance still doesn't feel right at all, whether before or after certain key scenes, the way events will develop and the intentions and motives of others are too obvious yet somehow the main character keeps missing them, plenty of times also being manipulated with hardly any effort, the levels of trust between characters are also hardly natural or reasonable... And that final chapter comes pretty much out of nowhere, reminding me of those scenes at the end of the last episode of a season of a TV series that was supposed to end but just got renewed for another season at the last moment, so somebody had to quickly replace the planned conclusion with a hook. In spite of it all, it's possible that I'd have, grudgingly, rated this higher than the previous book if I wouldn't have read it translated, but as it was...
Rating: 2/5