KneeTheCap: ..how do I proceed? Should I keep writing these little snippets down and hope in the end they'll form a cohesive story? Should I just start writing scenes and edit them later to fit the story in general? I've never done anything in this scale before, so I'm a bit lost.
Writing advice is about as unique as the people who write. Hopefully you'll find something useful here.
How do you feel writing down these snippets and ideas? Can you see an overarching idea forming from these bits and pieces you're doing, or do they feel more of a background idea, something that belongs in a
writer's bible? Neither is better or worse than the other -- if they fit into a book it gives you (and the reader) a sense of the place; if they're more for a writing bible, that gives you the background and information to refer to later.
George RR Martin says that there's two overall types of writers -- the gardener and the architect:
There are architects and gardeners. The architects do blueprints before they drive the first nail, they design the entire house, where the pipes are running, and how many rooms there are going to be, how high the roof will be. But the gardeners just dig a hole and plant the seed and see what comes up. I think all writers are partly architects and partly gardeners, but they tend to one side or another, and I am definitely more of a gardener. In my Hollywood years when everything does work on outlines, I had to put on my architect’s clothes and pretend to be an architect. But my natural inclinations, the way I work, is to give my characters the head and to follow them.
I, myself, am laregly an architect. I plot and plan out the story from start to finish to an almost absurd detail, though I do allow for random thoughts, ideas, and progression. As an example, this is a scene sketch I did in the past:
Some time later, Jim is in Prešov, waiting for his contact to appear. He mentally runs over his fake name, but before too long sees his contact and greets him with a code phrase. His contact stutters and stammers, getting out half the code phrase before a shot goes out and everyone in the area dives for cover. Jim peers out to see what’s going on but gets nicked in the arm; he grabs his contact and runs away. I can then take that and build on it. That scene ended up being almost 700 words with description, thoughts, dialogue, and action. For me, I can plot and plan almost anywhere -- give me a notebook and pen, or even my phone, and I can scribble my thoughts down. You may be different, with someone who wants to write as you go along.
Edit: Oh, and just because I'm an architect, that doesn't mean I remain that way. Sometimes I get ideas and inspiration for a potential future scene or idea. I write that down in the story with a good idea of where it'll fit and how I'll get there, and I can incorportate it later.
I've also (personally) found that using specialised writing software has helped me a lot. I use
but I've also seen a lot of people use and recommend [url=https://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivener.php]Scrivener. You don't
need either of these documents, but I found it really helps to have everything in one, single file and flick through.
But in general, regardless of what you do and how you do it,
just write. Don't be concerned about editing and changing/removing things. Just get it all down -- you can't edit nothing, after all. See if you can dedicate some small portion of your day to work on your book. Even if it's fifteen minutes in the evening, that's a guaranteed fifteen minutes you're using to work on your book.
Again, talking about something I've done -- I participate in things like
(once-yearly, November), [url=https://campnanowrimo.org/sign_in]Camp NaNoWriMo (twice-yearly, April and July), and
WriYe. NaNoWriMo is a solid "write 50,000 words in a month" (1,667 words a day) while Camp NaNoWriMo lets you set your own goals from as low as 10,000 (but still a month's deadline). WriYe is a year-long writing club, with a self-set writing goal.
The idea behind all of these is just to get you to write. It can be slop and utter drivel (I have one story where I got ~35k in and realised that absolutely everything I had done was boring; the idea is still there but the story itself is in the trash) but you will have something, even if it needs reworking and heavy editing. You will have
something to work with.
With all my plotting and planning, I know that I can sit down and knock out at least 2k words an hour. I don't need to stop and think what's going to happen next, as I've already written the general idea down. I block off all distractions and write in 15 minute bursts, with a 5 minute break in between. No thinking, no hesitation, just write. No concerns on spelling errors (and believe me, I make a lot writing like this). The advantage is that if I have only a tiny amount of time to write, I can do a short 15 minute burst and have 800 words. If I have a lot of time? Well, one day I managed 10k words and still had more than enough time to relax and watch a movie.
If writing the snippets and bringing the world together one piece at a time works for you, great. Don't try and change it up because another method might be 'better'. Just dedicate some time to writing so it becomes part of your schedule.
Good luck :)