Should be "
serious about the four-eighty-eight." (omitting "it"):
https://i.imgur.com/JjqUSa0.jpg Should be "The pant
s-buying shit." ("pants" obviously referring to the FALN track pants and incl. a hyphen):
https://i.imgur.com/WdXR4JI.jpg Another one (two actually) I'm not entirely sure about, since this could just be the ("broken") way Cuno talks (as in deliberately written this way), but if that's not the case, then it should be either
1) "Now junkies
are clawing at"
2) "Now
there are junkies clawing at" (or alternatively "Now
there're junkies clawing at")
resp.
1) "Street
's going mad." (inserting an apostrophe [ ' ] between "Street" and "s")
2) or left at "Streets going mad.", if it's supposed to refer to plural "Streets" after all:
https://i.imgur.com/swRn7CR.jpg Noticed this just now - shouldn't it show "
+1 Health" (similar to "+1 Morale") when hovering the cursor over the health bar/charges meter?:
https://i.imgur.com/AcqjTGy.jpg Should be "*in media
s res*" ("media" + "s"):
https://i.imgur.com/fSX0UIU.jpg Should be "from
its body." (omitting the apostrophe):
https://i.imgur.com/5eLDsKP.jpg Should be "hand
of his eldest daughter" (not "off"):
https://i.imgur.com/CsU8F67.jpg Should be "the Nachtherrer
's forbidden magic..." (incl. " 's" after "Nachtherrer"):
https://i.imgur.com/WkwwxA0.jpg Redundant punctuation (comma) after "northlands", should be "northlands he calls home.":
https://i.imgur.com/TZWFCkX.jpg Should be either
1) "
A son of Hjelmdal
l will never" (adding "A" before lower-case "son" + correctly spelling "Hjelmdall" [with two "ll"])
2) or alternatively "
The son of Hjelmdal
l will never" (adding "The" before lower-case "son" + correctly spelling "Hjelmdall" [with two "ll"]):
https://i.imgur.com/4Ua17ZF.jpg A little too much spacing between "armies" and "against" here:
https://i.imgur.com/fRdnSLK.jpg Again a bit of inconsistency with "Queen Lydiana" vs. "Queen Lydia
ana":
https://i.imgur.com/HmFiFT2.jpg Missing punctuation (comma) after 'green?"' ('shit is green?"
, the little whatever-it-is...'):
https://i.imgur.com/5MlFjCk.jpg Can be ignored if "taking the cage" is either
1) a real-life idiom I'm just not familiar with
2) an invented Revacholian idiom I obviously cannot be familiar with:
https://i.imgur.com/cV0jIPb.jpg A task-related bug for a change - '
Make truce with Cuno' lets you try to get on Cuno's good side again by offering him either alcohol, cigarettes or speed.
When choosing the 'speed'-option which, according to Cuno's response, is
not an acceptable offering and therefore should result in the appropriate 'failure' condition and take you back to the initial alcohol, cigarettes and speed selection again (like on the right hand side, after having tried the 'alcohol'-option) it instead presents the 'success'-dialogue options as if you went for the 'cigarettes'-offering (cigarettes being the only acceptable one of the three):
https://i.imgur.com/LHMaZdf.jpg