Should be "Occidentals" (with a "t" between "Occiden" and "als"):
https://i.imgur.com/kLDQcFV.jpg

Should be "progressive" (omitting the redundant "s" at the end):
https://i.imgur.com/QR2RI4I.jpg

Misplaced closing asterisk [*], should be immediately after "*BAD" and before the comma instead ("*BAD*," - just like in another instance of the same, only slightly varied dialogue line on the right):
https://i.imgur.com/GlmCuQa.jpg

Should be "THIS" (omitting the redundant "E" between "TH" and "IS"):
https://i.imgur.com/aJbJUWH.jpg

Should be "SHOULD I HELP" (adding "I" inbetween "SHOULD" and "HELP"):
https://i.imgur.com/FXMXCRa.jpg

Misplaced punctuation, the comma should be after the closing quotation mark and before lowercase "the" instead ('mean", the woman'):
https://i.imgur.com/Rkc6o6y.jpg

Missing punctuation (comma) after 'otherwise..." ' ('otherwise...", the woman'):
https://i.imgur.com/36zecqR.jpg

The 'Problem' and 'Solution' descriptions on the Thoughts could use another proof-reading QA pass in regards to consistent formatting resp. punctuation too.
It's likely not only the twelve examples picked for the screenshot collage that are quite inconsistent in the use of both the "curly" apostrophe [ ’ ] and the "curly" quotation marks, [ ” ] resp. [ “ ] (marked with the red boxes) at the same time with their regular "straight" counterparts, [ ' ] and [" "], often in the same paragraph or even the same sentence.
https://i.imgur.com/Mn4jD93.jpg

Missing punctuation (comma) after 'WORK!" ' ('WORK!", the ostensible'):
https://i.imgur.com/nhhpHWX.jpg

Misplaced punctuation, the comma should be after the closing quotation mark instead:
1) 'yes", the lieutenant'
2) 'course", she says,'
3) 'moment", the lieutenant'
https://i.imgur.com/86wBPGU.jpg

Should be "sildenafil" resp. "Sildenafil" (with a "f" instead of "ph"), like it appears once again and is spelled a couple lines later on the right hand side:
https://i.imgur.com/0qXNQyM.jpg

Should be "if you have the tools" (adding "if" before "you") so that it makes sense:
https://i.imgur.com/vvv43yv.jpg

Missing punctuation (comma)
1) after 'record..." ', should be 'record...", she steps'
2) after 'Lawman..." ', should be 'Lawman...", he says'
3) after 'this?'" ', should be 'this?'", he mocks'
https://i.imgur.com/MhGOqmx.jpg

Misplaced punctuation, the comma should be after the closing quotation mark instead:
1) 'know", the rat-faced man'
2) 'advanced", the heavy man'
3) 'player", the lieutenant'
https://i.imgur.com/LxrNwir.jpg

Misplaced punctuation, the comma should be after the closing quotation mark instead:
1) 'problem", he repeats'
2) 'that", he says,'
3) 'radio", he ponders.'
https://i.imgur.com/9o2m6oH.jpg

Should be "*Soldier of the Apocalypse*" (adding "the" between "of" and "Apocalypse"), like it's revealed to be explicitly said on the 'Doorgunner Megamix' tape (on the right):
https://i.imgur.com/l6c0Az6.jpg

Should be just "say", without "s" ("Does he say he's gonna do it..."):
https://i.imgur.com/xVoTn3M.jpg

Misplaced punctuation, the comma should be after the closing quotation mark instead:
1) 'course", he notes.'
2) 'Revachol", a man's voice'
3) 'harbour", Kim takes'
https://i.imgur.com/NbFioMR.jpg

Should be "south of here" (with a lowercase "s"):
https://i.imgur.com/8gxCjbC.jpg

Should be "me saying it *did* happen." ("me" instead of "my"):
https://i.imgur.com/ZVvZiPG.jpg

Misplaced punctuation, the comma should be after the closing quotation mark instead:
1) 'Yes", he says'
2) '*underdose*", the mesque'
3) 'that", he says,'
https://i.imgur.com/WnQw0DC.jpg

Should be just "That", without " 's" ("That sounds like..."):
https://i.imgur.com/oDuybV2.jpg

Missing punctuation (comma) after 'back to me*?!" ' ('back to me*?!", he roars.'):
https://i.imgur.com/IIsEYhz.jpg

Misplaced closing asterisk [*], should be immediately after "*next guy" and before " 's" instead ("*next guy*'s"):
https://i.imgur.com/T7egGFA.jpg

Should be "an" instead here ("A light green speck, an imperfection, on the outer rim"):
https://i.imgur.com/WJPjAvJ.jpg

Redundant, unnecessary quotation mark ["] here, falsely used to close descriptive "off-text":
https://i.imgur.com/O4WrU1D.jpg

Misplaced punctuation, the comma should be after the closing quotation mark instead ('*mulkku*", she points'):
https://i.imgur.com/pCwFhfo.jpg

Should be "holsters it in" (adding "it" inbetween "holsters" and "in"):
https://i.imgur.com/C9U5izy.jpg

Misplaced closing asterisk [*], should be immediately after "*alive" and before "?!" instead ("*alive*?!"):
https://i.imgur.com/eaLzL0h.jpg

Should be "Citizens' " (adding an apostrophe after the "s" at the end):
https://i.imgur.com/pnqRtoK.jpg

Misplaced punctuation, the comma should be after the closing quotation mark instead ('control", said Lawrence'):
https://i.imgur.com/r9D5pO1.jpg

Misplaced closing asterisk [*], should be immediately after "*Cuno" and before " 's" instead ("*Cuno*'s bitches."):
https://i.imgur.com/riLPuuh.jpg

Misplaced punctuation, the comma should be after the closing quotation mark instead ('yeah", he mouths:'):
https://i.imgur.com/TQJdyx7.jpg

Should be "have a jolly time." (adding "a" inbetween "have" and "jolly"):
https://i.imgur.com/qAK1Gz1.jpg

Missing punctuation (comma) after 'Fägäri...." ' ('Fägäri....", she whispers'):
https://i.imgur.com/epkNYiM.jpg

Should be "at the button" (adding "the" inbetween "at" and "button"):
https://i.imgur.com/E7sA5hd.jpg

Missing punctuation (comma) to set off the non-essential part of the sentence ("by the way") in both cases, should be "I'm Katya, by the way...":
https://i.imgur.com/alyjD6G.jpg

Misplaced closing asterisk [*], should be immediately after "*the k-word" and before the exclamation mark instead ("*the k-word*!"):
https://i.imgur.com/wxCdnmD.jpg

Should be "This is all" (adding "is" inbetween "This" and "all"):
https://i.imgur.com/mRFJIgk.jpg

Misplaced closing asterisk [*], should be immediately after "*Kipt" and before " 's" instead ("*Kipt*'s a cool word."):
https://i.imgur.com/0wnlWh4.jpg

Should be "The little one sputters," ("one" instead of "on"):
https://i.imgur.com/CVigeE7.jpg

Misplaced closing asterisk [*], should be immediately after "*fägäri" and before " 's" instead ("*fägäri*'s got you"):
https://i.imgur.com/sXHcvkf.jpg

Should be "our lesson" ("our" instead of "out"):
https://i.imgur.com/1XTsmQq.jpg

Missing punctuation (comma) after '"Shit..." ' ('"Shit...", he stops'):
https://i.imgur.com/pLuXz1p.jpg

Missing punctuation (period) after 'stops', should be 'he stops. ':
https://i.imgur.com/Q2aCNdx.jpg

Redundant, unnecessary spacing between the opening quotation mark and 'The' here:
https://i.imgur.com/3u9U2yk.jpg

Just one closing quotation mark after 'shit.' should be quite enough:
https://i.imgur.com/FiG8Fts.jpg

Should be "have a normal conversation" (with an "a" between "have" and "normal"):
https://i.imgur.com/GQcjTEZ.jpg

Chances are they're already going over the script again checking for errors themselves.
At least that's what I'd feel compelled to do if I had won 4 relatively prestigious awards and were to port Disco Elysium to consoles in 2020.

I still plan to do one thorough proof-reading pass on that extracted dump of the dialogue-script from github over the holidays though. Should indeed be way more efficient and a lot faster than doing that in-game.

Should be "initial" (with an "i" between "init" and "al"):
https://i.imgur.com/kMXd0Cx.jpg

Missing punctuation (comma)
1) after 'see it..." ', should be 'see it...", he looks'
2) after 'gloves." ', should be 'gloves.", he nods'
3) after 'Harry..." ', should be 'Harry...", he says'
https://i.imgur.com/msQh75A.jpg

Should be "behind the hostel" (adding "the" inbetween "behind" and "hostel"):
https://i.imgur.com/8GucdM9.jpg

Should be "It's", with " 's" ("It's incredibly late."):
https://i.imgur.com/XTgJTlf.jpg

A little too much spacing between "made" and "bad" here:
https://i.imgur.com/wtLklYX.jpg

Clothing poking/clipping through other 3D objects this time around, in this case, when seated in Evrart Claire's container office:
https://i.imgur.com/Jnww7Kz.jpg

Should be "HOMUNCULUS" (with an "U" between "HOM" and "NCULUS"):
https://i.imgur.com/pjr7k3f.jpg

With the sentence structured as it is, it should be "where I can find" instead ("I just want to know where I can find this man."):
https://i.imgur.com/7znw38z.jpg

A little too much spacing between the two consecutive hyphens [--] and "ethnic" here:
https://i.imgur.com/eH1ADiD.jpg

Should be "in peak physical" instead:
https://i.imgur.com/dMnMej2.jpg

Misplaced closing asterisk [*], should be immediately after "*Everything" and before " 's" instead ("*Everything*'s cool."):
https://i.imgur.com/eqg1P0I.jpg

Again, should be a colon instead of the period whenever time designations are used ("16:00"):
https://i.imgur.com/pZFUvy7.jpg

Should be "Citizens' " (adding an apostrophe after the "s"):
https://i.imgur.com/7CQaiSr.jpg

More inconsistent use of the "curly" quotation marks ([ ” ] resp. [ “ ]) instead of their overall way more prevalent "straight" counterparts, [" "]:
https://i.imgur.com/xPtVP5v.jpg

Misplaced punctuation, the comma should be after the closing quotation mark instead:
1) 'this", the woman'
2) 'yeah", the tall'
3) 'Funny", the lieutenant'
https://i.imgur.com/6N7KIAt.jpg

Should be "broad-shouldered" (connected with a hyphen), just like a few lines earlier (on the right):
https://i.imgur.com/mbzmEfk.jpg

Missing punctuation (comma)
1) after 'Glen!" ', should be 'Glen!", he roars.'
2) after '*And*..." ', should be '*And*...", he points'
3) after 'fat-ass!" ', should be 'fat-ass!", the scrawny'
https://i.imgur.com/sQb5uYw.jpg

Misplaced punctuation, the comma should be after the closing quotation mark instead:
1) 'it", he says,'
2) 'this", -- he looks'
3) 'no", the lieutenant'
4) 'differences", she gives'
5) 'questions", the Fixer'
6) 'No", he stresses,'
https://i.imgur.com/h8QEZy6.jpg

Misplaced opening asterisk [*], needs to switch positions with the opening quotation mark (' "*And* he stepped...'):
https://i.imgur.com/a1MOnwB.jpg

Redundant and contextually wrong use of "the" in this instance, should be "sent by Wild Pines" instead:
https://i.imgur.com/X1medC5.jpg

That's a redundant "s" added to "Angus' " there, should be "from Angus' stomach" instead:
https://i.imgur.com/AmyCwP9.jpg

Redundant, unnecessary spacing and quotation mark [ "] here, falsely closing descriptive "off-text" ('He turns to you.'):
https://i.imgur.com/BvaU2st.jpg

Since it's EASY LEO revealing that Elizabeth Beaufort was sent to law school by Evrart Claire, it should be "he" in this case ("Could he be talking about the Union Fixer,"):
https://i.imgur.com/yoNVVF6.jpg

Misplaced punctuation, the comma should be after the closing quotation mark instead:
1) 'maggots", the small'
2) 'line", he repeats,'
3) 'there", he points'
https://i.imgur.com/ZkDP1cO.jpg

Missing punctuation (comma)
1) after '"Why?" ', should be '"Why?", he hisses'
2) after '"Wrong?!" ', should be '"Wrong?!", he roars.'
3) after 'listening?!" ', should be 'listening?!", he repeats'
https://i.imgur.com/FkbldpW.jpg

Should be a closing asterisk [*] instead of an apostrophe here ('*what*?!'):
https://i.imgur.com/RWifpPd.jpg